Well lets just say there was alot for Peter to say:
- Brief: No one actually wrote their own brief specifying their clients
- Space List: Specify sizes of rooms
- Mass Models: Need to be accurate according to space list
These were points he mentioned to the whole class as no one actually done any of these correctly. So thank god, it wasn't just me individually who mis-read the brief.
In terms of my concepts and mass models, Peter didn't like Concept 1 or 3 the reason being that they wouldn't fit in with the surrounding buildings which made so much sense as they were quiet bizarre. However he did say concept 2 maybe has potential.
The main problem identified was the fact that it would be incredibly dark within the middle of the building as there would be no way any natural light would be able to reach this part of the building. There ways around it maybe inserting some kind light shaft? Or maybe even opening it up to create a courtyard? However we both agreed that I should separate the building into four/five smaller buildings, this way I could ensure that an equal amount of natural light could penetrate through each building.