I was nervous for this presentation as our lecturer told us that we will have a guest who will also critique, however I didn't let it get to me too much otherwise I'll loose complete focus. To be honest it wasn't actually that bad for me, I managed to talk about my idea and the overall sheet. Majority of things which were there was relevant, if they wasn't they would have been crossed out as shown with the red marker.
Main feedback:
- Take out a site plan, as i had two
- Include more detail in the general arrangement drawings
- Create headings, for example research, development, etc
- Improve my exploded axo drawing
- Layout things more effectively so it makes greater sense
- Come up with a name for my Add On.
Also our lecturer decided to give us a week extra for our final submission of our portfolio and A1 sheet, as he was happy with the level of work from us. As everyone did manage to work hard even though this project was alot more intense then anything we done last year. So I better start working :)